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Dear Friends,

I am writing to request your help about some question required to fill the SIR Application form out for South Australia Government. I filled the form out twice and the organism has returned it back because my answers have been too short and lack of arguments. I´ll be honest, I think my answers have been very complete but I don´t know what´s wrong.

I will post the questions and I will be very happy to count with your opinion. I only need to get other ideas in order to rewrite my answers.

It´s not necessary to answer all of them only questions you feel comfortable with.

If somebody prefers to send answers via email, please send to [email protected]

Thanking you in advance for your help and cooperation.

D: GENERAL INFORMATION

1 Do any members accompanying you speak English? If so who and how well?

6 How will you cope with life in a new country without your family and friends?

9 As you will not have access to Social Security benefits for a minimum of four years, how will you manage in the event you are unable to secure employment?

Note: Social Security makes reference to unemployment benefits and other subsides that the government could pay a citizen or a permanent resident. This question does not refer to medical or health care.

10 What efforts have you made about finding out about employment opportunities in South Australia?

11 What efforts have you made in contacting potential employers in South Australia?



12 Describe, in your own words, what attracts you to South Australia (why do you want to live in South Australia?

F: REQUEST FOR SPONSORSHIP


1 You have requested Sponsorship from the Government of South Australia to enable you to settle in our State. What contribution do you believe you will make to the State of South Australia, eg its economy, community, etc

Best Regards,

Daniel

Jam

    > Dear Friends,
    > I am writing to request your help about some question required to
    > fill the SIR Application form out for South Australia Government. I
    > filled the form out twice and the organism has returned it back
    > because my answers have been too short and lack of arguments. I´ll
    > be honest, I think my answers have been very complete but I don´t
    > know what´s wrong.
    > I will post the questions and I will be very happy to count with your
    > opinion. I only need to get other ideas in order to rewrite my
    > answers.
    > It´s not necessary to answer all of them only questions you feel
    > comfortable with.
    > If somebody prefers to send answers via email, please send to
    > [email protected]
    > Thanking you in advance for your help and cooperation.
    > D: GENERAL INFORMATION
    > 1 Do any members accompanying you speak English? If so who and
    > how well?
    > 6 How will you cope with life in a new country without your family
    > and friends?
    > 9 As you will not have access to Social Security benefits for a
    > minimum
    > of four years, how will you manage in the event you are unable to
    > secure
    > employment?
    > Note: Social Security makes reference to unemployment benefits and
    > other
    > subsides that the government could pay a citizen or a permanent
    > resident. This question does not refer to medical or health
    > care.
    > 10 What efforts have you made about finding out about employment
    > opportunities in South Australia?
    > 11 What efforts have you made in contacting potential employers in
    > South
    > Australia?
    > 12 Describe, in your own words, what attracts you to South Australia
    > (why do you want to live in South Australia?
    > F: REQUEST FOR SPONSORSHIP
    > 1 You have requested Sponsorship from the Government of South
    > Australia
    > to enable you to settle in our State. What contribution do you believe
    > you will make to the State of South Australia, eg its economy,
    > community, etc
    > Best Regards,
    > Daniel
    > --

How can any one give you an opinion on your answers if you have not
supplied them. You cannot ask a bunch of toral strangers on an internet
cht site to complete you visa application for you. How can anyone who
doesn't know you know how many people in your family speak English, how
many jobs you have applied for, how much money you have, etc.... You
need to look at all your answers again and ask yourself if you could
answer with a bit more information only you can answer things that you
have done, no one else.

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