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Old Nov 23rd 2011, 9:35 am
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Originally Posted by kittycat1
weasal I like the sounds of that- could do a bit of Sweet Charity number
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Old Nov 23rd 2011, 9:37 am
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OK TGF what is the matter with that post?
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Old Nov 23rd 2011, 9:42 am
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OK TGF what is the matter with that post?
May I suggest using the button on the right, before the button on the left when posting..
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Old Nov 23rd 2011, 9:48 am
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Originally Posted by kittycat1
Hiall,

I'm in the process of updating my websites and am rewriting my biogs, do you think biogs should be 3rd person or not? remember I'm a creative so don't have to be as rigid as a suit.

Feedback appreciated.

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>>salutes Spugsy<< Yes sir!
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Old Nov 23rd 2011, 11:33 am
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Originally Posted by kittycat1
yes TGF Im a hooker....



Ok no 3rd party writing going on :-)

PS any men that now feel prompted to mail me Im not atually a hooker so don't bother
The best ones are those who pretend not to be but actually are. I'm sure we can cut a deal.
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BB- I see you are on the charm offensive today.

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Old Nov 23rd 2011, 1:19 pm
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Originally Posted by kittycat1
Hiall,

I'm in the process of updating my websites and am rewriting my biogs, do you think biogs should be 3rd person or not? remember I'm a creative so don't have to be as rigid as a suit.

Feedback appreciated.

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3rd person comes off as poncy.
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Old Nov 23rd 2011, 2:05 pm
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As you're the brand, I'd write it in first person. If you need someone to take a look over it for you, I'm more than happy to help.
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Old Nov 23rd 2011, 4:29 pm
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thanks fluffy- pm me your email address xxx
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Old Nov 23rd 2011, 7:13 pm
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Originally Posted by kittycat1
thanks fluffy- pm me your email address xxx
Only write it in the 3rd person if you're going for smug, self congratulory bellend

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Originally Posted by Millhouse
Just to be different. I vote 3rd party. First person is unprofessional.
And today Millhouse lost touch with reality.
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Old Nov 24th 2011, 3:03 am
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Only write it in the 3rd person if you're going for smug, self congratulory bellend
Or if you're writing it from the company's perspective.
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Old Nov 24th 2011, 3:08 am
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And today Millhouse lost touch with reality.
not really. It just shows that people posting here do not pitch for things via a company led proposal format. Or if they do, they do not do it well.

Every marketing document I have ever seen, including the ones I'm in, are always written in the third person... Then again, it's the company selling the staff in most instances so it's a bit different I guess...
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