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Please red this letter and make correction??

Old Apr 18th 2009, 4:17 pm
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Hello all. Its a letter from my father in law in support of my FSW,its just for a support that i have one self employed opportunity while or antill i couldnt find work in canada. Please make neccessary changes and help me to give a professional and impressive look. I need your help in impressive vocabulary,as i have limited only. Thanks a million at advance to you all.




To Whom It May Concern:

I confirm that I am XYZ, Norwegian national, father of XYX writing this letter for confirmation of a business plan that I made with my daughter and her husband XYZ.

I know about Permanent residence visa application for Canada from my daughter and son in law. Both of them are financially independent and they can maintain all their financial need their selves but I would like to give you assure if they successful to get their visas for Canada, I have a business plan via my daughter and son in law which will be a financial opportunity while they are living in Canada.

Although they are already financially established and I am sure they can maintain their all financial needs during their stay as longer in Canada, the purpose of this letter is to give you assure, my business plan, which I have discussed already with my son in law XYZ who is experienced and professional in IT field, would be an other opportunity for both of them to establish economically in Canada.


Should you need any further information, please don’t hesitate to contact me at bellow numbers.


Name:-
Phone:-
Email:-
 
Old Apr 18th 2009, 4:22 pm
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Default Re: Please red this letter and make correction??

Mods, please delete this spam as it insults our intelligence.
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Old Apr 18th 2009, 6:07 pm
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Originally Posted by lionheart
Mods, please delete this spam as it insults our intelligence.
Well, atleast i got your intelligence (lionheart,lol).
 
Old Apr 18th 2009, 6:10 pm
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Originally Posted by mahharrouf
Well, atleast i got your intelligence (lionheart,lol).
By the way, forums are for do help and have help, my personal advise to you "lionheart" if you dont have some thing to help, please dont read, i saw no reason to jump in thread when you are same as me and you dont have to say thing

To mods, if there is some thing against to tos in thread, which is just simply letter and related to immigration canada, then please delete.I have no any objection.
 
Old Apr 18th 2009, 7:50 pm
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Default Re: Please red this letter and make correction??

I'm sorry but I'm going to close this thread.

You cannot ask the members of this forum (the majority of whom have English as their first language) to help you compose a letter which will help to show your proficiency in English. If we correct your English then that is cheating.

Furthermore, if you are applying as a Skilled Worker then this letter will only hinder things - he's talking about starting a business and there is a different visa for that.
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